show not tell

Recrafting using Show not Tell

Her face turned red.

 

Her mouth turned white when

Started to rain.

His eyes were as big as saucers.

His eye was huge and red flaming

My legs were tired.

My body ate with exhaustion

The man walked down the road.

The man ran a marathon just to get to the supermarket

tolaga bay

nz/aotearoa-our place

                 Tolaga bay

I climb up cooks cove I go there for holidays and I camp we take our fishing rods,tents and a boat we also go and my auntys mum and dad at cooks cove we see the hole in the wall and climb on the rocks to try and see fish, eels,stingrays,sharks.

pollution

pollution is affecting our marine life by 2050 there will be over 100,000 rubbish in our sea.

8x9 problem

this is my 9x8 problem for 20th wenesday june 2018 brake 8 with 3 and 5 and then 5 x9 and
then 3x9

clothes cloze

these are my clothes cloze its word you find in the box above and try make your sentence make sense.I enjoy that you can find words that  you feel cumfable in a place and the thing that challenges you is that you have to make sense.I think that what I might do diffrently next time is to make sense but you need the right words in like mine it make sense till the last bit. 

this is my super hero maths grid its who likes what superhero

these  are my use equal  to
= means same as
this was made in 2018 1.5.18

this is my logo art its my favorite things put into logos

my goals for 2018 term 2 are finally on my blogger these are what i am striving for in term 2.