show not tell

Recrafting using Show not Tell

Her face turned red.

 

Her mouth turned white when

Started to rain.

His eyes were as big as saucers.

His eye was huge and red flaming

My legs were tired.

My body ate with exhaustion

The man walked down the road.

The man ran a marathon just to get to the supermarket

tolaga bay

nz/aotearoa-our place

                 Tolaga bay

I climb up cooks cove I go there for holidays and I camp we take our fishing rods,tents and a boat we also go and my auntys mum and dad at cooks cove we see the hole in the wall and climb on the rocks to try and see fish, eels,stingrays,sharks.