Tuesday, 19 February 2019

2019 EOTC

Image result for scooter skate park

in week 3 term 1 2019 our neighbourhood
we went to the,skate,park,mini putt and surfing
i had pride in myself and stood up on my bourd and did grabs 
and got some holes in mini putt 
and i did 180s 




4 comments:

  1. Rilen accdently missed out your full stops.

    you used good details in your learning keep it up.

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  2. You didn't have any capital letters.

    But it is a good story keep it up!!!!

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  3. Hi Rilen I really like how you write about the shate park with a photo next to your writing pic.

    KEEP IT UP!

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  4. thanks every body i'll make it better

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