Recrafting using Show not Tell
Her face turned red.
Her mouth turned white when
Started to rain.
His eyes were as big as saucers.
His eye was huge and red flaming
My legs were tired.
My body ate with exhaustion
The man walked down the road.
The man ran a marathon just to get to the supermarket
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