in week 3 term 1 2019 our neighbourhood
we went to the,skate,park,mini putt and surfing
i had pride in myself and stood up on my bourd and did grabs
and got some holes in mini putt
and i did 180s
Tuesday 19 February 2019
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Rilen accdently missed out your full stops.
ReplyDeleteyou used good details in your learning keep it up.
You didn't have any capital letters.
ReplyDeleteBut it is a good story keep it up!!!!
Hi Rilen I really like how you write about the shate park with a photo next to your writing pic.
ReplyDeleteKEEP IT UP!
thanks every body i'll make it better
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